writing

This term has been fun so far. I think these activities in writing are helping me because last year we just planned the story and then we just go off and write the whole story. Now we do the plan and come back down and talk about the next thing we are going to do. I think my editing has improved because I am writing a lot more this term in my plan. I have liked doing this writing with Miss bates. It has been the fun year. I think I have improved a lot this year. My best story that I have done is the Andy Griffiths story. My 1st portal story I done was not very good because was having trouble to make it make sense. And with my second story i was more confident in doing my second story because the teachers helped me do my plan and they made it easer.
 * writing**

With miss bates group we started off with a plan and then when we finished our plan we went to surround Miss bates table and then she would pick a few people out to read them then she would help us to make our plan and story better and make it more interesting and make it sound better.